Rosemary Morris is interested in all things historical and organic gardening.
New release. Tangled Love a romantic historical 27 01 2012 MuseItUp publisher
Friday, 27 March 2015
Revision and adverbs.
Amongst other things, I revised the final chapter of my mediaeval novel set in Edward II's reign. I am now asking myself whether 'He laughed drunkenly,' or 'His drunken laughter rang out,' reads best. I chose the latter because I prefer to get rid of adverbs.